写作不堆词，用非谓语让你的句子更高效
📖 一、为什么写作要“瘦身”？
学生作文常出现句子冗长的问题：
She opened the door and she saw a cat sitting there.
虽然语法正确，但重复主语显得啰嗦。我们可改为：
Opening the door, she saw a cat sitting there.
✅ 句子更自然，节奏更紧凑，这正是非谓语动词的魅力所在。
💡 二、三种常用非谓语“瘦身”方式：
1️⃣ 现在分词（doing）——动作同步
用于表示两个动作几乎同时发生：
- He looked at me and smiled. → Looking at me, he smiled.
简洁又生动，是口语和写作中常用结构。
2️⃣ 过去分词（done）——强调被动或完成
用于描述状态或结果：
- When the meeting was finished, everyone left. → Finished, the meeting ended with applause.
书面感强，适合议论文与学术场景。
3️⃣ 不定式（to do）——表达目的
- He worked hard so that he could pass the exam. → He worked hard to pass the exam.
“to + 动词原形”简洁明了，是目的状语的常见替代形式。
🧠 三、避免错误的浓缩写法
❌ Running fast, the bus was caught by him.
句子主语不一致，逻辑错误。
✅ Running fast, he caught the bus.
非谓语动作的逻辑主语必须与主句主语保持一致。
🎯 四、实战练习（写作句式提升）
请尝试把下列句子改为非谓语结构：
- After he checked the report, he sent it to the manager.
→ Checking the report, he sent it to the manager. - Because she wanted to lose weight, she exercised every day.
→ To lose weight, she exercised every day. - When the project was completed, the team celebrated.
→ Completed, the project brought the team joy.
✏️ 五、写作范例比较
原句：People who study abroad can broaden their horizons.
优化后：Studying abroad, people can broaden their horizons.
➡️ 更自然、更书面，符合雅思、托福写作高分标准。
🎯结语引导
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