得短，不等于写得险
🧭 一、考试视角下，为什么要“谨慎省略”？
在真实考试中，阅卷老师关注的并不是句子有多复杂，而是——
👉 结构是否清楚，是否容易判断正确与否。
📌 对比感受：
- The report that we discussed yesterday was rejected.（稳妥）
- The report we discussed yesterday was rejected.（正确，但更依赖结构判断）
👉 省略本身不扣分，但前提是结构绝对清晰。
🧩 二、考试中“最安全”的省略类型
✅ 情况一：关系代词作宾语
这是唯一一个在考试中风险极低的省略场景。
📘 示例：
- The question that the teacher asked was difficult.
→ The question the teacher asked was difficult.
📌 阅卷逻辑：
从句主语完整（the teacher），动作明确（asked），不易误判。
🚫 三、三类“高风险省略”，考试中尽量避免
❌ 1️⃣ 关系代词作主语
- The student who failed the test was absent.
👉 绝对不能省
❌ 2️⃣ 从句过长，容易产生歧义
- The book (that) I borrowed from the library near my house yesterday…
👉 信息堆叠过多，省略后结构不清晰
❌ 3️⃣ 省略后像两个完整句拼在一起
❌ The man sitting there is my uncle.（在低水平作文中易被误判）
✔️ The man who is sitting there is my uncle.（更安全）
👉 在考试中，清楚 > 简短
🔍 四、阅卷老师是如何“看”省略句的？
阅卷时，老师会快速检查三个点：
1️⃣ 从句是否有明确主语
2️⃣ 动词结构是否完整
3️⃣ 是否存在歧义或断裂感
只要其中一点模糊，就可能被判为结构问题。
✍️ 五、写作对比：安全版 vs. 冒险版
🔹 原句
The policy that the government introduced last year was effective.
🔹 安全省略
✅ The policy the government introduced last year was effective.
🔹 不建议在考试中使用
⚠️ The policy introduced last year was effective.
（非谓语结构，对低分段考生风险较高）
📌 考试建议：
在时间紧张的情况下，优先使用“可判断性最高”的结构。
⚠️ 六、考场常见 3 大失误
❌ The sentence I don’t understand it is too long.
✔️ The sentence I don’t understand is too long.
❌ People work hard they succeed.
✔️ People who work hard succeed.
❌ The teacher explained the rule is helpful.
✔️ The rule that the teacher explained is helpful.
👉 错误本质：
省略后，句子结构没有重新闭合。
📝 七、考场判断训练（快选）
请判断以下句子在考试中是否适合省略关系代词：
- The email that I received this morning surprised me.
- The boy who runs fastest won the race.
- The advice which she gave me was useful.
👉 参考答案（考试建议）：
- 可以省略
- 不可以省略
- 可以省略